The Almight Martial Arts System Chap 5!!!!

Here it is, it’s late, but I’ve been fixing our house with my dad, so it took me a while before I could post this chap. Anyway, here it is, there’s still no action, ENJOY!!!!

Chapter 5

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7 thoughts on “The Almight Martial Arts System Chap 5!!!!

  1. I am disappointed with the MC…complaining about not having the combat abilities of the game…..combat abilities does not feed anyone. He should be grateful for the secondary profession…those professions are valuable in the modern world…

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  2. ♦ Actually, now he can make such delicious delicacies, but also has to treat Xia Xiaozhi well. → Now he could make such delicious delicacies, but he had to treat Xia Xiaozhi well.
    ♦ He initially planned to play ‘Knight-Line’ and recharge his account with silver yuan, but he didn’t have enough time to buy equipment and level up his character, it was all used up to level up with the use of his secondary profession, as a result he was disturb who was caused by Xia Xiaozhi.
    Jiang Fei was also mad at that time, as he almost drowned from the argument he had with the rebellious girl about food. Now, it seems that, if it wasn’t Xia Xiaozhi, he would definitely spend money in other aspects. At the time he possessed his game character, if he didn’t have his powerful secondary profession, at the same time have his character at level zero, then it wouldn’t have any use to him….. → the structure is all over the place. I’m not sure what it’s trying to tell.
    ♦ later I’ll these over again → I’ll think these
    etc. Still has errors and many weird placed commas…

    Cheers

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