The Almighty Martial Arts System Chapter 1 (Super Edited Version)!!!

Hey guyz, here’s chapter 1 again which i had edited so that it would become a lot better, I already have chapter 34 (still suckish version) as well chapter 35 (started to go on a new style-me not the author of the novel), anyway here’s the chapter which i hopefully made really better than the previous one, for those that haven’t read chapter 1 or would want to read it again, ENJOY (Hopefully you find it a lot better than the previous one)!!!

Chapter 1 (Super edited version)

Chapter 1

P.S. tell me what you think about it.

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3 thoughts on “The Almighty Martial Arts System Chapter 1 (Super Edited Version)!!!

  1. Well its better version of chapter but i thing the old version is good inough i hope the nex chapter get upoad soon 34
    note : aloot of time will be ned to rewrite all chapter but not everione wuld have the patient to wait for thats so just get beter for the nex chapter there no ned for rewrite all ok? thanks….!!!

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